Monday, 13 February 2012

First blog

An ordinary girl
in this ordinary world
I find happiness in the smallest of smiles
and tear up when somebody cries

People think i am confident, even when i am not
They think my life is perfect, not knowing how much i have fought.
May pretend it doesnt matter when it sure as hell does
would rather act like that, than admit i like the fuss

I get upset at the drop of a hat
But i am trying to get past that
Getting mad at someone for something they said
i plan out my next move when i go to bed
"next time i will say this, that and make them cry"
but when we meet again, all i can do is smile and say "hi"

Always try to do whats right

Being able to honestly say that makes me feel light
but i'm only human, sometimes i fail
rather live like a lion than like a timid little snail.
it's better to do what you believe in, even if it means you get into a fight

You can't please everyone, its smarter to please yourself
There will always be those that wish you go to hell.
Nomatter how hard you try, or how much you smile
Few will always try to trash you and criticize your style!

You might have all the money, and power but still feel helpless at times
Never forget the most powerful thing you can do is close your eyes and pray.
You are not a bad person as long as you keep away from crimes
hmm my first blog and i already feel like i'm getting carried away
but hey that's just me...feel what you may.

16 comments:

  1. Very good poem..More of everyone's story
    Nicely written :)

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    1. thanks alot Monkey :)..it is supposed to be for everybody :)

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    2. you are my very first blog commentor!! :D

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    3. errr...and seems like my only blog commentor :(

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  2. wow! very nicely put. I must say i am pleasantly surprised, didn't see this streak of poetry in you! I am totally impressed!
    ~ AMBER

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    1. yayy...:D thanksssssssssss!! :D i been writing since school! :)

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  3. this sounds like me! I LOVE it!
    ~ Noozia

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    1. thanks alot Noozia...:) i'm glad people can relate to this :)

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  4. Where is my last comment!! :O i commented :| anyways very good start to your blog hope to hear from you!! :D

    Toodles and Noodles tooo u :D

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    1. thankyou sooo muchhh...:D noodles ;D hehe...i guess i will write a lil more than i thought :)

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  5. Well written, good job... I like it. Always put your mind on paper and you will be amazed what you can compile. Look forward to more. ~Jeejz

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    1. thankyou so much jeejz!!! could use the encouragement :)

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  6. nice poem asreen....commendable work

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  7. beautifully writ :)... well penned :)

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    1. thank you so much!! i appreciate your comments :)

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