The world moves forward while i am left behind
where did i go wrong, maybe i should have crossed that line
The line i made for myself, thinking it's the right thing to do
Could it be that right when it usually made me feel blue
It's not so bad, but feels like i am missing something
What could it be, i do not know, i am still thinking.
The empty feeling, that i cant decipher
But i am waiting to see what life has to offer.
Overrated ? maybe it is, how would i know
But at least you wont feel like it was something you missed.
They say it is good, will i ever experience what they call true bliss.
Again nice 1...
ReplyDelete2nd and 23rd last line seemed to be out of the scope of this poem :/ maybe I am wrong
2nd and 3rd last line*
Deleteout of scope?! :O
Deleteawesome work!
ReplyDeletethanks :) Mr/Ms anony..:P
Deletenice :)...a snsitive write up...well you gave it ur azzy flavour too..wow girl gr8 going :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Aashi :) this coming from a great writer...m flattered :D
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