Sunday, 19 February 2012

Crazy thoughts

The world moves forward while i am left behind
where did i go wrong, maybe i should have crossed that line
The line i made for myself, thinking it's the right thing to do
Could it be that right when it usually made me feel blue

It's not so bad, but feels like i am missing something
What could it be, i do not know, i am still thinking.
The empty feeling, that i cant decipher
But i am waiting to see what life has to offer.

Overrated ? maybe it is, how would i know
But at least you wont feel like it was something you missed. 
They say it is good, will i ever experience what they call true bliss.

7 comments:

  1. Again nice 1...
    2nd and 23rd last line seemed to be out of the scope of this poem :/ maybe I am wrong

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  2. nice :)...a snsitive write up...well you gave it ur azzy flavour too..wow girl gr8 going :)

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    1. Thanks Aashi :) this coming from a great writer...m flattered :D

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